What do you guys think of the cover page I put together for my page layout class?

 

The text hurts my brain.

 

LOL i was wondering if I was the only one it didn't offend.

 

man, to be honest...I think u can put more time into it, it sort of looks like u jus threw it together. The cord concept is a good idea, maybe make the pics tighter together and definetly change text to something clean and techno

jus my 2 cents, I do this kinda critiquing almost everyday.

 

Thanx guys. It's due tomorrow I'll work on it tonight and show you guys my changes.

 

make the cord more life like by adding a brush with the pen tool and then use a brush that is a circle so it will look ribbed

 

maybe some sort of background like a lightning storm or texture.

 

Ok I added a little more effort into it this time and I think it looks like I took more then 15 min to do it. Thanx for the input.

 

^ alright man looks a lot cleaner....I think u should lose the gradient and shadow on the text and make it solid black, then make the font a little smaller than ur top box and try not to center the it in the middle, maybe center it close to the top of the first first box

man that seems complicated, but it's not

 

Better