That is as real as my bud once put the brake pads on inside out...

 

::And just as Windcalmer had started to feel that the human race was not lost..................this fool destroyed that hope. Now all of humanity was doomed.::

"Prep the World Destroying Laser Beam Miss Breeze!" Said Windcalmer

"Yes my Lord" Replied Miss Breeze

::Miss Breeze walks to the control panel and inputs the coordinates. The laser shudders and slowly turns to face the Earth::

::Looking out over the barren soil of the moon, Windcalmer slowly drops his goggles into place, and raises a clutched fist::

"FIRE!!!" Shouted Windcalmer

and so another world was ended by the stupidity of but a few...

 

Matt, has anybody ever told you that you're weird?

and as a side note, you shouldn't start a narration in past-tense and switch to present in the next sentence and then return to past in the conclusion. It's just bad storytelling lol

 

WOW, how did they miss the... BANG, CLUNK, TING, when the surface of the rotor broke off?!?!!?

 

Not if the story is being told by a a Narrator its not! LOL So there punk!

Oh, and yeah, I have hear that a few times before.

 

My god! That is absolutely rediculous. Some people...